Eric Hadeen - Is it too much to ask
Again, great talent ‐ great key changes and job overall…great vocal delivery/ you should be writing for musicals
Glen Raphael - Elisha was a prophet
Nice work, good writing and delivery. The vox needs more development which take this from good to almost great.
Emporer Gum - Pyrasmus
Nice opening and good idea, keep working on those vocals.
Jailhouse Payback - Xenu
Good writing, funny topic choice and you do it well.
Megalodon - Cassandra
Good lyrics, love the hook, What's the point of knowing what tomorrow may bring If nobody's listening, excellent lead guitar
Ross Durand - Sympathy for Hades
nice guitar sounds and lyrics and progressions
Rob from Amersfoot - Pygmalion & Galatea
good topic but I feel like the sections are kind of fractured which prevents it from having continuity.
Governing Dynamics - Wax Wings
Strong production, nice descents and instrumental sections, the pitchiness of the vocal can be a bit distracting and don't let your instrumental lines
become a form a mental masturbation
Mark Humble - Waiting for Persephone
I feel like this has potential if you keep working on the melody. It feels a little chunky and it should flow like water through a creek, with less effort.
Great lyrics and sort of like a fairy tale
James Young - Unbound
Good section breakdown and nice transitions. This could grow into something strong…
Ominous Ride - Sisyaphus
Love the harmonies and tough subject matter done really well.